this was good, but towards the end, you stopped your rhyming scheme and started a different one, which threw the flow off...otherwise good! 4/5

amazing. <3 5/5

I agree with ashli, but i still thought it was good!! well done!

Peace

Hippie
xx

I loved your poem! I love the story element in it. Beautiful job. Keep writing and take care.
> Kiesha

Touching and heart-felt, a world of ice and a world of reality...beautiful.

Good Writing!
beth

Beautiful poem. I am sure that any girl would love to be your Princess. Once again a Lovely poem. 5/5

Kalee