even tho it was short, it spoke a lot.. the lines that reli closed it up for me wer :

'but then it already is home
in the hands of the lost and lone'

that was reli wonderful..
keep up the talent
nouna
p.s. plz check out some of mine if u dun mind

That was a short poem, but it worked. I liked it a lot. It's beautifully written. Keep it up and take care.
><> Kiesha

I like it alot.
keep up the good work.

Emma