Comments : I must just try.

  • 18 years ago

    by **..Shell..//

    this poem is really, good, i can relate, hope ya keep it up hun, i'd appreciate it if you could comment on mine thanks

    xxshellxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    hey ! wow this is awesome, its how i felt my freshman and sophomore year in highschool...i'm a junior now..and i still feel like it...cuttin is hard to stop..i've tried a bunch of times longest i've made it is 3 and 1/2 months...my mom found out so i've been trying to stop..this might help but i'm not sure...i'm going to see a counselor for depression...and it might help you...anyways great poem ! hugs-hayley

  • that was an awsome poem. keep up the gud wrk. can u check out sum of my poems thx. x-x-x-x

    *Michelle*

  • 18 years ago

    by Gianna

    great poem i liked it, thanx for the comment <3 keep up thw good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Shannon

    Good job! I really liked it! Keep up the good work!
    !*Shannon*!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyshia

    loved it, very...dark but with a little side of depressed sunshine. kudos 2 u 4 reviewin my poem. much thanx :)

  • 18 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    hey your poems so nice... hm.. but it would be great if you put it a bit more touchy ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is a good poem! I like it 5/5. thanx for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    i really like it.
    spec the last stanza. well done chick.
    thanks for the comment xXxXx

  • 18 years ago

    by dyingxpassion

    hey awsume poem i really love i can relate to it... it greatt 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    hi.. thanx for your comment last time.. i like this poem .. it has a good rhyme..keep your good job.. ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Theresa

    Really great poem! I totally relate...

    <3 Moe

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    Very good.
    keep your head up.

  • Hey ...i luvd teh poem..really excellent...i can relate to the part wer u hide ur feelings bhind a mask...i felt this poem was written jus for me!...kep it up..!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Hey Rachel! its NATALIE!
    I love ALL your poems..Its soo Much better then mine. I'm trying to do better..;P but its just something I do for fun. Something to let my emotions out. YEAH! Anyway, keep writing, they're all amazing.