OMG!WOW!OMG!WOW! This is definatley one of your greatest. OMG! I love it sooo much...im speechless....lol!
Love you girly!<3
~*hAiLy*~

this poem is really good i totally can relate check out some of mine keep writtin

OMG this is really reali realy good. i love it! <3 lol well u better not be thinking bout that ok ok well yeah great jod it's like ur best poem ever. well i'm loving it. lol put a smile on. everybody cum on put a smile on. well keep up the teriffic poems. turn that frown upside down. dont be sad get glad. lol love ya always and don't forget it,
***aShLeIgH***

Wicked AWSOMe poem i can totally relate
~HazE

it's very good ... and the reason it is good is because it doesn't rhyme so much only at the needed parts ... u did good on this ... 5/5

wow- so dark, so beautiful, so scary, and so wonderfully written! great job on this one!

wonderfully written I have only read this poem of yours but I intend on reading alot more 5/5 keep it up

i like it but i dont really understand the beginning bit about waking up. i like it a lot tho.

i really liked this one. it was very well written. keep it up!
crystal