This is an amazing poem. My brother in law i s a marine, and went back to Iraq for the second time on the 4th of July. This poem makes me think of our Grandparents generation, the greatest generation. And how I wish our own haad the courage to live up to those standards. Your poem has great meaning and awsome flow! Keeep on writing. =)

u liek to make me cry dont u? my bro died 2 months ago in iraq. that was really really really good. wow. a 20/5/.

written well, and flows beautifully. I really like it.

That poem is amazing im joining the Navy and it just shows how much people care keep writing your an amazing writer

!! This poem is way sad, but so true I really liked it 5/5 keep writting you're good

this is very goood, and sad, but it gives the right effect, keep writing, could u comment on my poems please?

well done
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