Comments : My Contempt

  • This one is just beautiful and i understand what u mean by this poem
    my fav part:

    "Grow up for once and act your age,
    Take the advice given by the sage.
    Start to learn and then, maybe,
    I’ll start to think about a “you and me.”"

    yeah i c what u mean...not everybody acts they age...keep it up..wen u need somebody to talk to...just holla at me...5/5...
    kisses
    love alwayz
    ~*~PrEciOSa~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    It sounds a bit harsh, but I absolutely adore the last line.

    At first I thought you were yelling at a friend, but I like the surprise in the ending.

    I have no complaints for this one.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Wow...if she didn't hear what you were saying then she's an idiot. Very well written. Blunt but so nicely put...I love the last stanza...Excellent ending... :)

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Nice poem fowler....but i find it kinda hard on the girl....i'd be hurt if i was the gal ur talking bout
    but good write
    good expression
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaTia McDowell

    I like your poem...It's describes how my relationship is now...

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Another great poem. I love this line: 'Stop blaming others and look within'