maybe you couldnt change the last line a little. apart from that i love it.
its amazing.

Am I here to live
Or here to suffer.

^^ the bit i like best.
well done *hugs* xx

Am I here to live
Or here to suffer.

That was AMAZING! i mean it. Its great to start a poem with such a great stanza. Great job.
Hayley-Ree xxx

that's a really really good poem! check out the rest of mine too, the one you saw SUCKS ass. lol. great job!