A heart beneath the wind

by unstated affinity   Jul 25, 2005


Just you and me..
in this part of the flee
we have done every step meticulously...
but why..?

just you or me....
probable to be free..

secondly and thirdly..
this world hasn't been friendly...
to you and to me..

but neither you and me...
never ty to be free..
because you and me
have left our memory...
eternally......
in the wind of uncertainty...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    hey yuniardi, I was just reading this one again. very good ending.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Allen

    that was well written good job. keep it up. thx for commenting on my poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    excellent poem. I loved the way you wrote it. you're so talented. keep writing.
    take care,
    marjan

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