Comments : Mag

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    really deep, I like it alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    amazing!!!! *5* i love the last stanza! im really sorry if this happened. take care and stay strong!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Lovely poem, its always horrible to watch someone so ill even if you're not particularly close to them.. Love you

    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Great poem you have touched one of my fears become old and fragile very touching!

    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Incrediable imagery! So strond i could see it feel it, sense it, like I was there. Powerful words! Stay strong!

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Its nearly time for me to go and I just wanted to say, I'm missing you already, I cant wait for this week to be over, I love you so so much and I hope you feel the same, you make me so happy, you make me laugh and have the best times..

    I love you, with all my heart, please be there when I get home..
    I will be there for you, always

    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Roulin

    It's hard watching someone you love die slowly. I remember it. Stay strong, I'm always here for you.
    Luv Scarlet xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Excellent word choice. The imagery was awesome. Very well done. Great poem.
    ~Faith otF

  • 18 years ago

    by wendy

    Wow you are such a great writer i gave you a 5 and added you to my fav.