good poem,it was worded just perfectly!

fantastic. I loved it alot. Very good job. It's a topic lots of people can relate to. Very well worded and flowed perfectly. Flawless! *5*

Really good poem. And like ohers have said it is definately a poem that many can relate to as it is often said where is he? and why me? The poem had a lovely rhythm and flowed really well.
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Kate x~X~x

good poem..

William if I may I very much liked this piece and it shows alot of heart and confusion on the understanding of God. Trust me I been there and I think in alot of ways I am still there great job putting it into words check out my featured poems if you get time...

a very powerful poem
good job

GREAT!!!We belong to no god...God has forgotten us...Let`s forget him too...5/5...Elisabeth chill...

Great poem is all i can say. You are a great writer. I think everyone wonders what it is that God thinks of them as he watches over them and I often times wonder if god has noticed the way i've changed from my childhood to now.