Comments : What If

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    That was a spectacular poem. Nice strong ending too! 5/5

    Always here,
    -Razor-

  • 18 years ago

    by Layla

    thats a really good poem talk to me sometimes I live in n.y too

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    really like it!!! keep writing and stay strong!! x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    I love this one... i think im going to write it down and put it on my wall...its really good... :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lynsey

    wow thats deep i feel ya there. nice poem keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Hey I loved it!!! You're a really great poet.. I'm always here if you need 2 talk. :-)
    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I loved the way you wrote it.
    you seem really talented in writing.
    I was just reading "Through The
    Looking Glass" profile. that was
    why I decided to check out some
    of your poems. I'm happy I decided
    to do this. keep writing.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow... great poem, I loved it, had a good beginning and strong ending, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by F U

    Great, very deep poem, u r very talented writer. keep it up, 5/5 frm me, oh and thanx for commentin on my poem =)

    rach
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Change

    Hey! Great Poem! I can totally relate! I sufferd from depression and anxiety so I had really similar feelings! Well done! Dont stop writing! 5!