Back the way old times in the Gotham City, My old classmate MSE a.k.a. Batman, only way to reach the Power is conquer yourself! It's over. Go your own way -- free. Because there's something deep inside you, man, that's very much like Me! AGZ a.k.a. Etrigan

Thanks guys...I hope your souls will find all the darkness they need...

this was nice

i wish i understood it more though

good job<3

great job :) i loved it ! :) nice work!

*~peace and love~*

omg..... i love so much.....ok that sound kinda weird and what ever but if you knew me you would understand.... dude your poem is so mad.... the more i read of it the more it drew me in.... its got a great flow n its deep but i really loved it.....

Very good poem! Good ryhmes and flow! 5/5
Keep it up! *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Whoa what an awesome poem
I loved it :D
Dark and gorgeous
Comment on my poems
They will never be as good as yours
xxxxx

great poem , I really liked it ..
So dark, I enjoyed readingi t .
Keep it up
April

great poem , I really liked it ..
So dark, I enjoyed readingi t .
Keep it up
April

great poem , I really liked it ..
So dark, I enjoyed readingi t .
Keep it up
April

great poem , I really liked it ..
So dark, I enjoyed readingi t .
Keep it up
April

great poem , I really liked it ..
So dark, I enjoyed readingi t .
Keep it up
April

haha oops sorry my enter key got stuck ....
sorry

great poem reminds me of my friends josh. hes goth and a very depressed person. keep writing your really good

dude that poem is hot!
wish i was even close 2 writing like that!
keep it up

amy

That's really cool and it reads well..
XxX Charli XxX ~*~

Very interesting poem. Well written. Check out mine too. Cheers!!

Very cool, Thank you for commenting on my work.