Comments : Back Home Tickets!

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    Hey all mates,
    Its been really long time since I posted some, I've been writing silently not feeling too well to post . Now am Back again.

    am just missing my old beautiful days, my friends and some memories I wish they all come back again! I titled my poem "Back home Tickets", as I said those days are my home, I so know that no one can sell me those Tickets, they dont even exsist! its just a try.

    Much Respect,
    Rua Francis.

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    The best comment from my aunt:
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    Dear Rua, I am so glad to read your marvelous poem again, It was so touchy and I think you are putting your feet at the right step, but I would like to whisper in your ears, few warm words, Dont feel so blue!!! dont let your worlds upside down !! as you are so young and smart.

    May each day of yours be bright and beautiful!!!! so enjoy your life, as it is so short!!!

    Wish you all the best.

    Your aunt......Juliet ewaze

  • 18 years ago

    by SSBAL

    GREAT POEM!
    wow, loooong time since i've even found time to sneak in here, but i did, 3 months after u're latest poem...hey canadian!

    ok, so i dunno if any1 i know from here still writes on here, i cant go on, so yea...

    but hey canadian!!!! it b the american!!! lol

    luv ya
    jo

  • 17 years ago

    by a bUi

    What can i say your poems are simple but so passionate and descriptive. i love it :)

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Great!!! Simple but amazing!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Andy

    Really really good poem :)!
    very creative with a good use of words too
    :)