Hi sweety :)
''I want a sandy beach, and a chestnut sky
I want to lie beside you, as the stars mantle our eyes'' why did y0u put th0se tw0 sentenses in?? *I like it*
perfectly sh0wn y0ur talent again :D
hey this poem is lovely.. great job! i really enjoyed reading it you're such a talented writer and i hope you keep writing! fantastic job!
p.s. if you have time please check out some of my poems