Comments : Would You? ...

  • 15 years ago

    by Romy Rose

    Hi sweety :)
    ''I want a sandy beach, and a chestnut sky
    I want to lie beside you, as the stars mantle our eyes'' why did y0u put th0se tw0 sentenses in?? *I like it*
    perfectly sh0wn y0ur talent again :D
    *hugs* PunkChick

  • 15 years ago

    by Romy Rose

    I d0n't kn0w why I asked it.. th0se sentences keep on replaying in my mind ;).. there w0nderfull :)
    *hugs* PunkChick
    P.s.. d0 y0u have msn??

  • 15 years ago

    by LindaPham

    hey this poem is lovely.. great job! i really enjoyed reading it you're such a talented writer and i hope you keep writing! fantastic job!
    -take care
    -BrokenSmile
    p.s. if you have time please check out some of my poems

  • 15 years ago

    by Sharon

    Wow really love it really really heart taking keep it up