great poem... i love the way you describe your father, very realistic ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

wow... this poem blows me away... because this is EXACTLY how i feel about my dad. Except its just me and him. I do all the work since my mom, sis and brother left. He says he works all day, but so do i, and when i come home i work more. Checkout my poem "How boring my life is".
Hayley-Ree xxx

Great job

ITS PERFET !!!

I LOVE IT !!!