truly awesome poem, i know what you mean, or what you meant if this poem is from an old book

this is also another gud one of urz.. i jus din noe if u wanted it to rhyme or not... anywayz, i lyk the choice of words so touching..
keep up the gud work

thats so sad... its great work though
good job
5.5

I really enjoyed readin this poem, you've done well and your use or words are very descriptive! well done.
luv em

5/5!

Tragic and haunting but beautiful too that the speaker can not see themselves in a better light that they could have.

Excellent organization, great depth, amazing word choice. You have such talent. It is so nice to read a poem that doesn't have just words but one that you can actually "feel"

I hope you don't still feel like this either...but i thought it was very well written.