This is damn awsome I CAN NOT WAIT to read more! U could go really far with poetry if you wanted to :)

wow nice poem dude !! still waithing to see more

Wow dude excellent peom but sad take care and keep p the great wrk

Hey hun if u get to read this e-mail me i miss you
love always yr girlfriend briana

Where are u? : (

Hey i met u in the chat room u should write more *rates 5/5*

Wow luv i'm impressed
you have talent
keep it up