Comments : One, two... *nursery rhyme with a twist*

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Godd poem i like it coz sumtimes i feel like it but wat u gonna do?......life gose on!!!!!!5/5 take care and keep u da great work