Comments : I could take

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Wow... extremely deep and meaningfull.. Could really feel the pain in this poem! Great work, From Kane

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael Mantione

    Whoa that gave me chills i really liked it and like they said deep really deep.you better not do that then you wont write anymore poems you have a flair for it.5/5