This is really sweet, there's a lot of emotion in it. This is basically what every girl wants !!!
Thanks for commenting on my poem, i really appreciate it.
XxX Charli XxX

I love the last line of this poem, simply awsome!

i think we'd all really love a dream boy!!! really good 5/5 :)

Its simply great! I wonder why don't you write more? You are such a wonderful talent!!