I liked this poem...thanks for the comments on mine...and i took your advice and spaced "Changed Forever" out....thanks...anyways back to you...i really liked this poem...short and to the point... it is definetly a different style of writing...and it works so keep it up...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

I like this but it confused me a bit, maybe thats the point :P

WoW!!!!!!! great job! Wonderful! 5/5!