If u comment plz vote it would be greatly apprecitated, also plz look at my other poems.
much love peace out
YoUr WhAtEvEr
JaNeAn aKa ThE MuFFiNmAn

I agree with Marissa from the comment before mine. :-)

Your poem made me cry! are u sure u are so young? wow u have talent! the way that u really put the emotions into your words.... wonderful. great job hun!

This is an amazing poem. I used to be a Christian, so I can sort of relate.....I've never liked religious poems (unless they were of my religion) but this one was really good. My friend recently died...and she was scared that she'd go to heaven instead of hell....so in a way I can sort of relate to you.

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DFK

Even though this never happend it put a tear in my eye!! I practicly cried!!! Ive lost a friend in death so this poem was very relistic to me!!! Plz continue writing!!

I know how you feel to dream of someone you love dies, i had it quite a few times and each time i woke up with tears..:'(...hey nice poem by the way...where have you been...haven't seen more from you yet...