This is really good, it's got a good message.
Thanks for commenting on my poem !!
XxX Charli XxX ~*~

soooo true, great advice.
Thanks for the comment

Wow that's good

This is a very inspirational poem, and it rhymes very well. To have so much talent and be so young is amazing. You'll make it big someday. Great Job

DFK

This is a very inspirational poem, and it rhymes very well. To have so much talent and be so young is amazing. You'll make it big someday. Great Job

DFK

I love this part especially, since i love the whole poem

So all you little dreamers
Be careful what you do
Hold tight to your dreams
And one day they'll come true

And now i believe my dream will come true,
Thank to you, i realize i need to get working on my life.

I LOVED THIS POEM!!!!! U R such a good writter i would luv if you would comment on my poems!!! Keep Writin!!!

Very nice poem! The story is sad and makes you think. Very emotional write - good work!
5/5