Nice. i like the last two stanzas best

Wow! that is SO good! i can deffinately relate to it, and fortunately, when he did get the message, he stayed with me. keep up the good poems!
~*Gabbi*~

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Hey that poem was sweet your really good at writing poems x

Great poem
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Definitely questions that are going through everyone's mind at one point or another. good!

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