Very very good! clever as well :)

It made me smile greatly!

I Loved your poem it was great.
Sarah

i thought your peom was so sweet..this is true love i feel the

sorry i accidently submited it but like i was saying i thought your poem was so sweet..this is true love i feel the same way about my boyfriend i love him so much everything you said about the 20 ways you love himi love my boyfriend the same way and more!!!! your a good writer and good luck with your relationship!!!

Wow, thatw as awesome.. keep on doing wu u do, cuz its gr8

wow....thats awesome...i really like it!

WOWEE!!!!! That was really good! u seriously need to teach me how to rhyme so well! Can I give this to the girl of my dreams?????
Keep up the really good work!!!!

you hate him and love him - is he worth it. sounds like a lot of pain to me.

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! GREAT JOB! YOUR LOVE FOR THIS ONE PERSON IS DEEPLY FELT IN THIS POEM! LOVED IT! 5!

wow! incredible! plz coment on myn!

Awwww.. You seem so much older lol. That's so sweet:') I wish i had someone love me like that. It's amazing lol. *hugs* Keep up the great work sweets.

~Jessica

wow your soo unbelievably talented... i can't believe your only 13! the 13 year olds i kno are all immature and could never write anything that beautiful! they're all busy seshing up.. which made them idiots, so it's way awesome you don't smoke... never start!! you'll ruin your life and that would suck! (obviously lol)
your an amazing boy and your girlfriend has quite a catch haha it sounds like you really do love her and thats the best thing in the world!

by the way i gave your poem a 5... i would have given it something higher but i cant! :( haha well i cant wait to read your next poem!

much love * adrian

Yet another good poem 5/5... once agen....
-MaRissa*

I heart your reasons for loving her, but I think my favourite was how you started the poem.

Way to go.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Once again an exquisit poem!!...you've made me speechless yet again....!!..*rates 5*
*~Meggy Lee~*

This is one of the best poems i've read, it is actualy rhyming well and it brings acros a pure devotion that hasn't bee done before. wel done and keep up the good work. take care.

Wow..It was more than wonderful..U wrote what u feel in a very incredible way ...The flow was good and u kept the rhyme as well...This is interesting
Keep up the good work..