nice poem i liek it i like the ending the best, keep it up hope to see more of your stuff

Great job!! Especially for your first poem. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more work from ya. :)
xox
~Jessica

AWWWW..sweet poem..i really like it...lol take care and keep up the good work sweets...

~mallory

Never thought i could laugh agin
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it was quite repetitous....but good message.