Comments : There story is sad to tell

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    very good work

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    OmIgOsH tHiS pOeM mAy HaVe BeEn LoNg BuT iT wAs WoRtH rEaDiNg!!!!! It PrAcTiCaLlY bRoUgHt TeArS tO mY eYeS!!!!!
    eLiZaBeTh

  • 18 years ago

    by sara

    WOW...This was amazing....really really amazing....it rocked great work i luved it!!!!!!!!!!!!you are so gifted that was really amazing.....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    amazing hun!! i love it! keep it up.
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    OMG! That was amazing!! I dont think i blinked! All you work is so good! Keep it up girl you got something goin for you!!
    Thanks for the comment!
    Becky

  • 18 years ago

    by Lakiah

    i loved this poem and the rest of them keep doin what u doin lol!!!

  • oh wow..that was just.....wow...i am speechless and not many poems can do that to me. you wrote that just amazingly. great great job..i am crying..you just did an amazing job...good job..i give it WAY more than a little 5..u did an awesome job.. xoxo Crystal

    p.s. please if you could check out some of my poems. It would mean alot.. great great job at writing this..it was beautiful......