That was gorgeous...So sad though..I'm hoping and praying that it isn't true...I hope that you're okay! 5/5!

Really good job here, rhyming flowed well.

Terrific writing. the 2 of u make a great team. i hope 1 day i become as good as u.

My fallen angel - messenger of doom
For with you, left my sanity
And came this shroud of gloom

^^I like that part espeically. Excellent, 5/5, keep it up : )

♥Niki

Wow...speechless, i dont know who ^^ that is up there but its very great! let him know its incredible!! the emotion was yet again in there!! 5/5!