Comments : Red Roses

  • 18 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    I did like your poem ..it was good . but one of the lines didn't seem to go so well (Only my thoughts )
    "He'd drag me back to hell
    ....with him..."
    To me it just didn't fit ..put the rest was great . I like how you used the devil or at least I think you used the devil to describe another person ..that is what to me it sounded like . Keep it up ... I will surely read more of your poems
    April

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    INtense and original. Great work i really enjoyed that piece, you have a way with words. Keep it u and never give up! Let that love mend you!