Comments : In My Eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Your first poem!!!! Thats amazing keep it up plz comment and vote on some of mine - good girl your bloody great you have such talent

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    'You won't see a whole person, just bits and peices of me
    I don't know who I am, or even who I want to be'

    I really like that part. It's the most powerful bit of the poem. Good work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    this is really good, it makes me worry, but it's good!