Omg i think im gunna cry for a 13 year old ur really good im kinda proud of u its nice to know that they're are people out there willing to show they're emotions

keep at it your great

mwah best wishes

lisa

HEY THIS IS MEGIE AND I THINK THIS POEM IS SAD BUT ITS REALLY GOOD I THINK UR GOOD AT RITING POEMS! :-)

I really like the poem. its so sad! i only wish that it wasnt one big stanza..that it was broken up a little. but thats just me. either way, great job!

I love how this poem and the other one I read, just have this realization right when it is just too late. It is almost sad to see how blind the people in the poem were, but maybe as the saying goes "You don't know what you've got 'till it's gone."

Great Job 5/5

Ben

Wow wow wow i love this one
your way better then me lol

Wow that is very sad...but it has great emotion and ryming!

This is a poem that could be a song and it'd wipe out every other song out there. With this single poem, you could make a movie, a book, a song, an even bigger poem, a play, anything. Just because it's so deep and dang!!! it's emotional! - 5/5!!!!!