Comments : I am a fake

  • yay thats rea||y g00d.
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  • 18 years ago

    by Lulu

    I really love your poem, alot of people do feel like that I guess. Well i know I do it really meant alot that you could say those words that im feeling so exactly and beautifully. People always think that I'm just soem happy crazy friend and they don't care to try and see past that cuz there is alot inside. I loved your poem alot:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Symera

    Thats exactly how i feel at times and its hard for me to caputre it in my poems b/c i do feel "fake" like idon't know whow i really am you know. After trying so hard to please every1 else and make them think i'm some1 i'm not.. i've lost the real me. Good job of bringing the reader into your poem like u were speaking directly to them. Thats a great way to get the readers attention.