Comments : Together Forever

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    I loved this poem and I can really relate. The rhyming was perfect and the flow was great. Keep it up ღ

  • 18 years ago

    by UNKNOWN GUY TO ALL

    NICE NICE NICE. I REALLY LIKE THIS AND I KNOW HOW U FEEL. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

    ~UNKNOWN~

  • 18 years ago

    by Marine Wife

    awsome poem.... keep up the great work..

  • 18 years ago

    by Some Random Human

    That was very good, and I can relate...to care so much for someone, yet nothing from them...and knowing that you don't deserve them...yeah...great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    wow... very nice... you really have talent... when you have new poems,just tell me.. i would like to read urs more..

  • 18 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    wow... very nice... you really have talent... when you have new poems,just tell me.. i would like to read urs more..

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    wow great poem =)
    gd flow as well
    keep it uppe

  • 18 years ago

    by gorgeouslilmissy

    hey! im really impressed by ur writting!! your really talented!!
    keep up the good work! *5/5*
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    Wow this is beautiful poem keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    This is beautiful!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    That's another cute one...... omg i would be blessed if you were one of my friends........

  • 17 years ago

    by Netesa

    I really like this poem, shows how much you care. You really put the poem together nicley.

  • 17 years ago

    by Echelon Eric

    This poem is amazing. the words flow like a river and the rhyme is flawless.
    5/5 very excellent.

    i'd appreciate if you'd look at my stuff and rate/comment too, thanks