OMG! Hunnie this is so sad! I'm sooo sorry you have to go through this. I hope you and your mother all alright! Email me if you want to talk!

Love you
~*hAiLy*~

ouch
that really was a strong poem ....
i like the way u put feeling into ur work
way to go girl
agwa shay

nice poem....5.5

This is very touching stuff which really sent a shiver up my spine. You have got talent girl. Keep up the good work

You know when i was smalll i used to hide from my parents when they argued until one day my mom was bleeding allover the place we had to take her to the hospital your poem reminds me of my childhood n all those tears im glad my dads gone now