yeah girl right from my lips , i love it it portrays such emotion,anger,love,pain,betrayel,lonleyness,and so much more,you've painted emotions of a darker and deep part of your self good job i knew you had it in you
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thank u! thank u! THANK U!!!
omg u are such an artist! ur approval means like SO much more than 1000 good ratings!
hope u don't mind that i featured this one, i thought it kinda portayed both of us.
thanx for all ur support,
ur an awesome friend ANd writer
luv u
don't forget it
*rach*

hey that's exactly what ur aproval means to me.........you are a very talented writer, i'm just extremely honered to be working with you..i don't think we could ever not get along.........to great freinds
luv ya babes
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WOW THATS THE BEST I'VE READ SINCE I'VE JOINED THIS UR FRICKIN AWSOME!

short and to the point. great poem. u wrote every emotion down in just a few words. great job.

Hm...that was pretty good. I liked the part where you put "silence screams eternity. i think that was my favorite line. it kinda has a mystery type of thing going to it. I lk it. 5/5