I agree with Kristina, very beautifuly written. I love your style, keep it up.

That is so sad and I'm sorry that you lost your sister...My mom lost her 13 yr old sister when she was 16 and two of her borthers, 6 and 9 yrs old...She knows what you're going through, even if I cannot! 5/5 on this poem, very touching...

Very cute and very sad... I'm truly sorry if you never really knew your sister. I wonder if the two of you were twins. That wouldn't be too hard to imagine, she would be as bueatiful as her sister.. hehe. (sorry if that sort of sounds like a pick-up line, its not meant to). I'm rambiling again, another great poem, very captivating and sad. Stay strong ^_^x... Say, can you look at some of my stuff? I'm not "WOW", but I'm alright.

great poem 5/5.... made me cry *sniffles* very sad...

great poem 5/5.... made me cry *sniffles* very sad...