man this poem rocked!! it flowed really well. great job!!!

5/5

Hey, very well written, great poem. I'm adding you to my favorites, hope to see more soon.

I really like your writing style, a lot like mine! I look forward to reading the rest!

This was REALLY good kinda dark i loved it!

Very emotional and very, very good. Such display and flow is near flawless, and its beautifully discreptive. ^_^x.

I thought you used a really imaginative way of portraying this topic =] reallygreat job the flow was perfectly done ^^