awesome

Wow, the first stanza is smashing, I really love it.

I kept wanting more. Lovely!

Warm regards,

Steve

Dim, Dull, Dark, Dead.
My Misery And Pain Gone.

I am speechless..this was simply excellent...I felt the sadness within it, probably because I feel like this sometimes..

Only one little thing...I think you should finish it with "I am sorry", instead of "I'm sorry"...I dunno why..it kinda emphasises that you really are sorry..

anyways, great poem. Keep it up!

I liked this poem it was different and i could feel your pain! I really enjoyed it and sometimes it's better just to write 'randomly' :) instead of worrying bout flow and all that! K I'll stop now:)
Wicked Poem!

I love your poem