i like it

wow your poems are deep. i like it. keep it up

For being only fifteen years old you are quite a writer young man. At fifteen I couldn't write for anything. Excellent man, this is a good deep poem.

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rachael

It's great:) I like it. Keep up the good work sweets *hugs*

~Jessica

Good poem..suprise suprise! well i hope we can like do this commenting thing bak n fourth again..it was fun...hey if u wanna im me i got aim: eeeriddler08 k have a good nite!

Hey. Very good poems indeed, specialy when I saw that you were not older tht me:)

Another peice of art.

Wow. man you have such an amazing writing style. i love this poem , it is really really good.