i dug it

I loved it. Your good w/ words. Don't stop writting.. its good therapy.

Excellent work I love the imagry you used, and your vocabulary was better than I've seen before. Keep up the great work
~*Freak*~

wow, powerful...

Wow! This is something reaaly great! Really liked the words you put!

I can feel this. It was very good. Keep it up!!!

PixieCorpse

Thanks for your comment, and I think this poem is excellent. I can imagine the whole scence while reading, it's just amazing! keep it up!