love it! you did a wonderful job finding ways that kids innocence is something that everyne should enjoy and cherish and how poeple as they grow tend to lost that.

~PLP~ lil slam~ thanks for the comment~

Aww. This was so awesome! :) Thanks for the comment. Take care and God bless!

wow! that was a stunning poem! loved it! 5/5 love the comparisons! thnx 4 ur comments 2 :)

love mark xxx

OMG!!! that was such a great poem. It is one of my favorite ones that i have read and im pretty sure it will always be. Im amazed on how great this poem was. Keep it up. SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YA

nice poem

This was a really sweet poem. And so true. Children are truely special. I loved the comparisons you made. Great job:) And thank you for the comments on my poetry. It really means so much:)

Wow this is a strange structure but it is a great poem love the change