I should point out the obvious spelling mistake, like you did me ;), pane of glass, pain of heart dear..

A really dark write this time, a morbidity about it that stirs the saddend soul, wonderfull work as always, as you say, "Yay u!"

Hope your ok

*hugs*

Darkie

Excellent work, all i can say is that your words have the potential to chill blood, or to stop a heart because of the raw emotion that flows from them.

5\5

Awesome poem and keep writing...i like ur outlook on urself and ur misery..i kno that sounds mean but i mean it in a good way..u can express how much u love or hate urself so easily...
love ya lots,
sore

That was really good. I liked the line of thought you took the reader on - from you harming yourself because of others to you haunting and wishing harm to the others that didn't help you. Liked how you repeat the first two lines throughout. Very effective.

Mo

Oh, this was greatly written poem, you have done a great job.
keep up the great work dear.

And the first lines, I stopped reading.W
Why?
You violated three rules of top poetry in three lines.

First off: In the first two lines, you use "self" twice, and in the first three lines, you used "sent" twice.
You're repeating yourself <way> too much.

Second off: Sending a knife through your heart is oh-so cliche! Kill the cliche!

And third off, you don't have any form, no rhyming or flow almost, and it's just bad.
Also, in <all> of your poetry, you're missing punctuation. That is really important; it helps the flow immensly.

Sorry, Jennifer. I don't mean to sound mean, I'm just honest and trying to help.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 2.5

Great poem very strong well writtenh