Comments : This Place

  • 18 years ago

    by redxiii

    great i have a place like that in my mind when i am alone thats what i mean by demons and dark angels lol well 5/5 for sure awesome keep it up

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Maybe I'm off here, Ren, but I read this as more about our planet than the demons in your mind - how it is suffering and how we have damned what could be a paradise. Who are you addressing? An alien, maybe? Or someone not of this world at the least.
    It could be interpreted a couple of ways, and that is never a bad thing in any form of writing.
    Well done ad all the best,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Hey Ben!

      I like the idea of people interpreting poems in their own way. It allows them to enjoy the piece and expierence something that hits more close to home for them.
      I like your interpretation of this poem being about the planet! It fits very nicely with that. It's been so long since I've written this but even I get a few different ideas about it.
      Thank you for reading and for your insightful comment! :)
      I appreciate it!

      Take care!
      Ren

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    I was there too, didn't see you.
    I think you left before me.

    Ren, or are you still there because I have joined the light - the happiness.

    Come, it feels good in the light too.