I know how you feel-- if i were to give you my truest opinion-- i would say it wasn't too great of a poem because of the rhyme scheme, but the feelings came out really strong... i would still say it's really good.. that's what i look for in a good poem-- the ability to convey your feelings-- and you surely have that ability...
keep writing..

Love,
Ipsita

Hey chicka i told u i would read em and i like em alot