good writing there:)

Hello stephen! talk to me sometime on aim if you can, love you bye

*(*((*((Michelle))*))*)*

Great poem! I really liked it. Although the last line fits...i thought that maybe instead of saying this goodbye is for good, you could say this is the last goodbye??? To me it would fit a little better. And thank you for your comment.

Wow that rele good! btw thanx 4 the comment! i look forward to reading more of ur poems.
-Sami