I like it keep up the good work.

WoW! This was amazing! I loved your rhyme scheme, the internal rhyme was awesome! I loved it! 5/5!

You have a great rhyming scheme, the vocabulary used was also good. My interest peaked at
"I sit alone on my lonely throne
The master of illusion.
In my mind, I'm not blind;
It's better than confusion"
Great poem. ^_^x