wow. it's really good. i'd like to hear it with music. you're a really good writer! keep it up!
crystal

awww i liked that one your a very talented writer sounds like you dont have a good friend well keep writing your good!!

Britt, that was absolutly amazing! I love it! And you know I wouldnt just say that. This is an awesome song!!!! I <3 it!

That was a really great song. It's sort of sad, but it has a lot of feeling, I can tell. Did you put it to music? Keep on writing and take care.
><> Kiesha