Crimson truth spills out
If you promise silver secrets

The world to be oblivious
to my nightly sins

wow... silver secrets. you truly are original. i don't think i've ever ready anything like your poems. i've read some great poems but yours are very original and different in a good way. keep on writing!

This is great, though I hope you don't actually cut...Please, Stay Stong and Keep Faith!

Maharani-

I like this piece. I especially enjoyed these two lines:

"Crimson truth spills out
If you promise silver secrets"

Very original. ;)

Just wanted to praise you for that originality...

Peaces. //ari\\