Wow that so good tons of emotions and feelings i would have to say this is one of my favoite poems! Keep writing and i will keep reading , can you read some of mine and tell me what you think ?

hey thanks for my comments im glad you liked my poem , this is a really good poem as well, 5/5 great work and keep it up

Wow, amazing poem, I enjoy reading poems like this, and I am glad I looked at this one, it really shouted at me from the screen and made me just want to read more and more, its good when poems hook you from the very beginning and leave you wanting more and this poem did that, quite often sad poems are very samey but this one was really fantastic, I love the last two lines
"I just need a reason to live
a reason to keep the reaper at bay"

I love this, it is amazing, well done to you..

i loved the strength ur words evoked in the poem..it was gr8.. it made it a lot powerful than it wud otherwise be without them.. ur in control of ur rhyme and its flow..

i just need a reason
a reason to put my life in my breath

that was amazing..
keep it up

Hey! This is great and I'm sure many can relate! Great job! 5/5!

Wow interesting poem...i liked it...lol...so much emotion was brought into it and man can i relate..lol..well luv yas mwah

-kayla-

this is and awesome poem... i can relate!!
can't wait to read more of your work... awesome!
take care,
xoxoxo

Ahh once again maybe it's like the mood im in right now it seems like there is something wrong! i can not figure it out though i think the flow may be rough but i am not certain for it seems to flow okay but maybe its not great, you rhyme well...good choice of topic...but there is just something!!! driving me crazy ill figure this out eventually lol but yea good job cause as long as nobody else can find something wrong your good to go

5/5

Amazing poem! i can really relate. it is beautyful. and thanks for the comment on my poem. it means alot. keep up the great work
~crystal

I cant say much cuz this is a definate 5/5
wonder how ppl could vote such a nice poem as 4.7
amazing stuff !!
i like the way u put it in words
i like the style
lovely work
love
amy