Short, but good...

very mysterious and dark.

I am a big fan of such poems..you managed to create a great atmosphere with your words here.

peace

Good poem it creates a sense of mystery which makes you want to read on it has a good flow as well!

take care

nice poem, short but effective, and wording is nice.

well done
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Steven,

this was another great poem by you. it got me all excited, an dmy blood was rushing. great job, always keep writting!

Always, -xKitx-

That was really good. It was really mysterious, which I thought made it sound really cool. But great job.

~Krissy

Nicely done :)

One thing i would change is that you use trade twice instead of "Implements of the trade" try unknown is his fate